Dangerous , sad, its an upsetting nature
I ask my self every day why i would bring a child into this world
So full of pain
And we are all too blame
I think everyday
I do try and force happiness
But i shouldnt
For then its not really me
An act is all that i see.
I speak these words
Only because of what i have heard, felt
Witnessed.
I would love nothing more
To bring joy as well as have the joy i need
You need, we all need to live a happy endless life
Bringing up kids with a gorgoues wife
Just as the stereo-type does
A big family
No doubt very happy
Why cant he see what i see.
Perhaps you see it
The truth of this world
Yet if this is true
How do you do the things you do
how do you not go completly insane
how are you having child after child
knowing the world they are to growing up sin
there are bad people making a sin
why would you do this i ask
i ask an sencere question
i understand the good the bad comes with the good
and too right it should
for we all work very hard
we all do our very best
some try better than all the rest
we know this
yet does it pay off
is your world yet bliss
I walk down the streets of my home
Most of the time i work alone
Am i frightened
Of course
I see the truth
Im lightened.
Is it fair
That for every good deed
Someone will sin
They dont care
Like littering,instead of the bin
To them we are rubbish
To each other
We fight, we argue
Dont say 鈥樷€檌 dont鈥欌€?br>
coz i know you do.
I do it too.
The question is are we willing to change
I am, i want to
Whats your answer
Do you want to
Would you like to see the change
The change that stars quote in there song
I know its something
That we all long
There is one thing that scares me
This i speak isthe fact that it may never happen
So asking of this could be a waste of time
Doesnt people give a **** about their life
I do about mine
I want to have kids knowing there growing up
In a happy place
I want to see the smiles on my childrens face
Rememeber what we all got taught about
The human race
The sad thing for myself
Is knowing i have changed
Yet im waiting for my back up
Which i know will never come
This harsh world will never come undone
I suppose whats done is done
Forever people fighting
forever people arguing
forvever people shouting
forvever people drinking
children nothing but swearing
walking around become there abusive roll models
the children are the future people say
so we need to teach them good
starting from today
i will always belive its never too late
i will always believe we can get rid of hate
i will one day Look at you
And see you as a mate
Its all good asking these things
Its great writing
But all im really doing
Is waiting and holding
Holding on to a dream of ours
We all have that same dream
That we can one day walk down the street
All our friends get together and meet
With no enemies about
Not 2 people have to shout
Talking in a respective way fowards one another
Careing for each other
Like you theier mother
Where are your thoughts now
When was the last time you had a row
Was it over anything major
Or was it petty
When was the last time you belived in something
Do you belive i am talking truth
Am i overreacting
Why do i see life as really bad
Everything about it makes me mad
Yet worse, looking around makes me sad
Knowing my baby could walk to school
Upset becuase of bullies
He might not tell me
So therefore i dont know
The truth i cannot see
He comes home and puts on a brave face
Just for me
How many people are more happy than sad
How many are living than dead
how many bills in the post have you read
how many holidays have you had
am i reminding you a little
are you not yet getting mad
you not bored of work work work
and only little play
i hate those who say
鈥樷€檞ell this is life, get used to it鈥欌€?br>
Their the ones whos life will never imrove
Not even a little bit
thats my theory on it
am i right or wrong
what do you think
i just know that one day
we all just sink
so i want to make the most of my life
i want to work less and play more.
What can you do at the age of retirement
Surely not much.
What do you think so far....?
It is really really good you have tried to describe a whole lot scene of the future ahead of you really impressive.I too write poetry and though its too long i dont mind reading it be it 10 pages or simply 4 lines.I think you can write really good and will go real ahead in poetry if you keep writing and improving and making others love it.I really know how it feels when someone reads it and likes it its like a happiness that flows within you, something you cant describe i have felt and hopefully you too will feel when there are soo many people to appreciate you and love you.Poetry is the best way to express and you are doing just right.Just a suggestion that try rhyming words more it will make it more interesting and i already read it 4 times i seriously love it!!! GOOD LUCK IN FUTURE AND POETRY...
What do you think so far....?
yhea its good but i think you should end there its already pretty long and after a while some people might lose the intrest to read it all
It's a great poem but you really should end it there or shorten it up a little. By the end of the poem i was totally confused and lost, it's a lot to read. But it's still a great poem=]
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